Thursday, August 5, 2021
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Hey Ashlyn. I really like how you added details to your writing to make it more specific. It sounds like he is pretty good at blending in with all the black clothing that he wears. Well done on editing it.
ReplyDeleteHi Ashlyn! This is really good! I like how you added extra details with the background instead of just having it plain! I loved reading this, and it was very interesting!
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